Here is a poem. I was saving it in the hope of publishing it in the literary world some day. But then I got real. It is not very good, and if I publish it here on my blog, I can still say it is "published" right?
Of course, if you get the urge to put it in an anthology of "One hundred greatest poems ever" or something, please feel free. Don't forget to tell me about it.
Thank you EskomYesterdayYour razor eyes peeled backmy carrot skin disguiseExposing things long tucked awayBy mouldy familiarity.And I, cold and raw, x-rayed youAnd I too saw.We tiptoed a fine-spun thread,teetering on edges of ugliness,Eyeing depths that offer no returnthat plunge to parallel dimensionswithout intersection.I stiffened, poised to leapinto the icy winds of love’s defection,into the slipstream of the left-unsaid,but then the lights winked outand wewell we did something else instead.brilliant poem is copyright of Po.
12 comments:
That definitely doesn't sound like knitting to me!
I hope you get published ;)
What? Knitting?
Seriously - it's a wonderful collection of words. But I have to take exception to your choice of picture - surely you should be showing an energy saving CFL bulb?
Brilliant, Po. Love it. When I'm rich and famous, I shall publish it in a book of modern verse ;-) If Eskom is still around.
wow..very impressive!
Hehe, thanks guys,
msbehavn: uh, haven't knitted for some years,
6000:sheesh, those damn energy saving lightbulbs, when they say 100w on the box, they really mean 1w!
Tamara: Ooh, hope you get rich and famous soon!
Miss T: hehe, thanks
If I ever publish a collection of poems, yours will be on the first page!
lopz thanks so much, maybe we should just publish our own anthology anyway :)
very well done! loved it :)
Good poem. When are you getting published did you say?
;)
Hey dumpee, um, will get published when Eskom never needs to shed another load?
You should get published one day!
thanks kitty
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